After showing these to David he agreed with me that the second one is the better one. He did also say that I should’ve used grid in my work which i did not realise. It didn’t take to much work to rectify this. I am pleased with my final designs.
Here are some sketches I made digitally using a programme called Onenote on my Laptop/Tablet.
I would just like to say that chances are none of my final out come will look anything like these but these have given me an idea of what i might do.